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Name: Trần Thùy Dương
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Sunny Chen   
Jun 23, 2023
Writing Feedback / Task 1: yearly salary of three bakeries in Calgary between 2000 and 2001 [3]

There are some mistakes in your task:
between 2000 and 2001
I think it must be "between 2000 and 2010".
it was the lower the end of period
Since there are three bakeries, I think "the lowest" are more appropriate.
and comsistent grew to over 6000USD
"Consistently grew" is more correct.
Hope my help is useful for you
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