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The process diagram details the steps by which pineapples are produced for sale

This diagram showed the process that how the pineapples are produced for sale.
The ideal temperature for the growing of the pineapple is between 28 to 30 Celsius degrees. At first, It has a stable size with 26 centimeters high. 7 months later, it is bigger. Then, the farmer uses a special chemical. 5 months later, it is big enough for processing different things. Standard pineapples weigh 2 kilograms and are 30 centimeters tall. The next step is cleaning. They use water to clean it. Depending on the types of produce they want, they have different method to process it.

There are 2 main ways to process the pineapple: for exporting and for food production. If they want to export it, they use wax to cover the outside of the pineapples. Then, they pack them into bales. Finally, they transport them to the ship to carry them to their client. If they want to produce food from pineapple, they remove its stub and peel. If they want to produce pineapple's juice, an exactor help them to convert it into juice. If they want to produce canned pineapple, they chop it into small pieces and can it.

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