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Mar 8, 2024
Undergraduate / Colors - Subject of Personal Importance -- Scholarship essay [3]
@Holt
I was thinking since the prompt says to choose ANY subject of importance to me, so what I aimed to get across was how my struggles with art forced me to grow as a person. The 'subject' in question can then be interpreted as my art, or maybe even the colors. Does the prompt necessarily say it has to be a person or event, as it only states those as 'examples'? But I understand your point about the essay being too roundabout, I will try to make the message more direct. Thank you for the feedback.
@Holt
I was thinking since the prompt says to choose ANY subject of importance to me, so what I aimed to get across was how my struggles with art forced me to grow as a person. The 'subject' in question can then be interpreted as my art, or maybe even the colors. Does the prompt necessarily say it has to be a person or event, as it only states those as 'examples'? But I understand your point about the essay being too roundabout, I will try to make the message more direct. Thank you for the feedback.