astronaut
Nov 29, 2009
Undergraduate / UC PROMPT 2.- Important experience. [13]
I tried to bottle up the anticipation and put it aside; however, I felt like Alice in Wonderland entering into a new dimension.<-- I like this reference
It was a new experience for me as I have<--had learned to follow strictly from the teacher's instructions.
Why did Americans tip after eating at a restaurant?<--LOL me too
Excited for what I have<-had done, I greeted the elders and handed him his book.
Because I only had gone to an elementary school in Korea, I was not cognizantI feel like this is an awkward word chocie. You don't have to feel obligated to use big words. of these stringent school rules. I thought of the independence given to American students and the usual American's courtesy in passing objects with one hand to the elders. Suddenly, these American customs nowchoose between 'suddenly' and 'now'. It's a bit redundant. appeared rational to me. It was evident that aspects of American culture had been embedded This ('It was evident'..'had been embedded') is a passive voice. Active voices are always stronger. in me.
Now that I am capable of observing from the vantage point of two discrete, unique cultures, I have perspectives <--a perspective that others do not have. I will continue to seek out discrepancies between the two cultures and embrace them. After all, we are so different, yet the same.Strong Ending! I like it.
I tried to bottle up the anticipation and put it aside; however, I felt like Alice in Wonderland entering into a new dimension.<-- I like this reference
It was a new experience for me as I have<--had learned to follow strictly from the teacher's instructions.
Why did Americans tip after eating at a restaurant?<--LOL me too
Excited for what I have<-had done, I greeted the elders and handed him his book.
Because I only had gone to an elementary school in Korea, I was not cognizantI feel like this is an awkward word chocie. You don't have to feel obligated to use big words. of these stringent school rules. I thought of the independence given to American students and the usual American's courtesy in passing objects with one hand to the elders. Suddenly, these American customs nowchoose between 'suddenly' and 'now'. It's a bit redundant. appeared rational to me. It was evident that aspects of American culture had been embedded This ('It was evident'..'had been embedded') is a passive voice. Active voices are always stronger. in me.
Now that I am capable of observing from the vantage point of two discrete, unique cultures, I have perspectives <--a perspective that others do not have. I will continue to seek out discrepancies between the two cultures and embrace them. After all, we are so different, yet the same.Strong Ending! I like it.