Edukid2309
Oct 5, 2024
Writing Feedback / The Death Penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree? [5]
The essay is well-structured and effective, regardless of some grammar mistakes. Perhaps the contradiction part may need more relevant examples as there are countless cases of criminals having their sentences reduced, as your main idea also relates to the unnecessity of death penalty, preventing what you want to say from being overshadowed
The essay is well-structured and effective, regardless of some grammar mistakes. Perhaps the contradiction part may need more relevant examples as there are countless cases of criminals having their sentences reduced, as your main idea also relates to the unnecessity of death penalty, preventing what you want to say from being overshadowed