yaywriting
Nov 24, 2009
Undergraduate / I considered Emory University for its academics: Emory essay [3]
Hey, Emory's supplement on the common app asks why I want to go there besides the location, size, and weather.
Can I please get feedback on whether it's good/ways I can improve? Thanks!
Here's the essay:
Above all, I considered Emory University for its academics. I found that my interest in political science only increased after learning about Emory's opportunities in that field, among others. The Bard Semester seems like a great opportunity for a student to explore and gain expertise in various fields. Looking at previous places where students have interned, my confidence that I will find a place and a program that fits my desires is solidified. It is evident that most students put forth significant efforts in research and internships. Maybe that is the why the school's unofficial mascot is Dooley; he seems to represent the typical college student ï overworked to the bone. But while Dooley works hard, he finds time to enjoy his college experience, as is evident by his appearances throughout campus.
Emory students confirm their resemblance to Dooley through their active participation in campus and community events. While traditional learning is probably the most important aspect of a college, I believe one should connect to the society and make an impact on their world. At Emory, I think I would have a chance to help the school and Atlanta community through journalism and volunteer organizations. I can also immerse myself in cultural activities and learn about other ethnicities thanks to Emory's diverse student body. As someone from two different cultures I am interested in learning about other people's experiences and views on dissimilar customs. With an Emory education, I feel I can expand my knowledge and benefit the society in return.
Gracias!
Hey, Emory's supplement on the common app asks why I want to go there besides the location, size, and weather.
Can I please get feedback on whether it's good/ways I can improve? Thanks!
Here's the essay:
Above all, I considered Emory University for its academics. I found that my interest in political science only increased after learning about Emory's opportunities in that field, among others. The Bard Semester seems like a great opportunity for a student to explore and gain expertise in various fields. Looking at previous places where students have interned, my confidence that I will find a place and a program that fits my desires is solidified. It is evident that most students put forth significant efforts in research and internships. Maybe that is the why the school's unofficial mascot is Dooley; he seems to represent the typical college student ï overworked to the bone. But while Dooley works hard, he finds time to enjoy his college experience, as is evident by his appearances throughout campus.
Emory students confirm their resemblance to Dooley through their active participation in campus and community events. While traditional learning is probably the most important aspect of a college, I believe one should connect to the society and make an impact on their world. At Emory, I think I would have a chance to help the school and Atlanta community through journalism and volunteer organizations. I can also immerse myself in cultural activities and learn about other ethnicities thanks to Emory's diverse student body. As someone from two different cultures I am interested in learning about other people's experiences and views on dissimilar customs. With an Emory education, I feel I can expand my knowledge and benefit the society in return.
Gracias!
