Writing Feedback / 'A few years ago, boarding school was a fresh coming thing for us' - IELTS: Boarding school [3]

overall, i think you get your point across...there are a few errors in word choice and spelling...for example, in the second paragraph: Firstly, parents are busy and they always under a lot of pressue of work, they have no enough time to take care of their children - i think you should've written it like:Firstly, parents are busy and they ARE always under a lot of pressue of work. ALSO, they DO NOT have enough time to take care of their children. i capitalized the words that i added in or changed...good luck!