Writing Feedback / Technology developments kill the traditional skills and ways o living. [4]

It is thought that technology developments in a country is the main reason for the traditional skills and ways of life to die out , and it has become pointlessmeaningless to try and keep themit alive. I so very agree with thethisstatement . This can actually be seen in any country nowadays.

Undergraduate / What are the three things you want the Bucknell faculty to know? [2]

really liked all three. make sure you read through and make sure you add your own personal touch rather than say the cliche "never give up" kind of thing

remember they want to know what makes you unique so be yourself. hoped that helped if not sorry. read mine please!!!

Undergraduate / UC Personal Statement Prompt 2 about Badminton [7]

pretty good
i think you got wordy and had some run on sentences
try to make it more concise
also i dont like to ending im not sure whether its serious or comedic or whatever just feels weird to me, but I love the badminton describtion love the sport. Try to put your on personal touches on it rather than it being just a comeback story that can seem generic. Overall, its a good start

hope I helped!!!