papulin23
Dec 9, 2009
Undergraduate / The day that I would become the New York City champion in the 1000-meter race. Common app essay [10]
Hello again. I tried another one, which kinda describes me as a runner.it has 142 words, and I hope that its better than the other one.
"I always prepare myself both physically and mentally before a big race. Running not only requires the strength of my muscles or my way of breathing, but it also requires a strong mind that can help push myself to higher levels. Thanks to that great mentality, it had helped me reach goals that I never imagined to achieve. That's what makes me a good runner; always focusing on the race before running on the track. Always wanting to be better, trying to compete with the best, never fully satisfied with my times, wanting a always a better time. That's how I know I can improve even more, by having a strong mind and always thinking positive about myself, thinking that I can make it even further, but only if I want it to happen. A great runner always requires a strong mentality."
Thank you
Hello again. I tried another one, which kinda describes me as a runner.it has 142 words, and I hope that its better than the other one.
"I always prepare myself both physically and mentally before a big race. Running not only requires the strength of my muscles or my way of breathing, but it also requires a strong mind that can help push myself to higher levels. Thanks to that great mentality, it had helped me reach goals that I never imagined to achieve. That's what makes me a good runner; always focusing on the race before running on the track. Always wanting to be better, trying to compete with the best, never fully satisfied with my times, wanting a always a better time. That's how I know I can improve even more, by having a strong mind and always thinking positive about myself, thinking that I can make it even further, but only if I want it to happen. A great runner always requires a strong mentality."
Thank you