Posts by vinniemagg

vinniemagg

Dec 3, 2009

Undergraduate / Help with Harvard essays "a person who has affected me" and promptless essay [11]

your essay if very well explained. you used precise language to support your response. i think the college admissions officers will appreciate your different spin on this essay. most people don't write about mean teachers. however, you should be careful in your critical analysis of Mr. John Warren. you don't want to sound to harsh. college admissions officers do not want to see how you might not get along with teachers. overall, good essay.

vinniemagg

Dec 3, 2009

Undergraduate / Tennis. Common Application Short Answer:Elaborate on an extracurricular activity [4]

can someone please critique my essay. thank you.

Tennis offers a great opportunity for players to build character. During my time spent playing tennis I have learned the value of honesty and integrity. Tennis is one of the only sports where the players call the game. On the high school level, it is up to the players themselves to call lines and follow the rules. Because tennis allows for your opponent to make calls that directly affect you, there are always times when people get cheated, whether on purpose or through an honest mistake. Through tennis I have learned how to manage and negotiate conflicts in an honest and integral way.