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itsjustme   
Dec 18, 2009
Undergraduate / "my family belongs to a catholic religion" [7]

..yea,,thankz for helping out guyz..

..although,its kinda leyt for shannon92..EF_Kevin..
..i already pass it,,and i edited some of those paragraphs and words..
...i hope they will like it,,..^^ yea,,i did take out the satan thing,,,...lol..
..ill be practicing more of my english..hahahah...

..tnx a lot!!...
itsjustme   
Dec 13, 2009
Undergraduate / someone who made an impact on your life (my unlce) [2]

Sometimes we come across a person who changes our whole perspective of life for the better. Last summer I met uncle Marat . My parents sent me to my uncle on holidays. I was supposed to spend my whole summer holidays with him and his family. And that was the first time we have been introduced to each other. At first, I thought that it was going to be my worst holiday ever. I felt embarrassed of living with people I hardly knew and wanted to return home but days passed and I got to know my uncle better.

Everyday we used to wake up early in the morning and go for fishing. We packed our bags with provision and went to the river. He taught me how to fish and then we sat together for hours, fishing. While fishing, he used to tell a lot of interesting stories based on his own life experience.

He told me stories about his student life, about his career, and about life in general. Once he asked me who I want to become and what I want to achieve in my life. I didn't know what to answer and never thought about it before. He told me that I should decide wisely so that in the end I would not regret about anything I have done. I told him that I don't know what I want to do. Then he told me that I should do only what am I interested . I remember his words, he said: "Don't care about money or prestige of your occupation. Just do what you really love." I started to list things which I love and began writing them to my diary. The whole summer I spent exploring myself and finally I decided that I want to connect my future with physics and architecture. So, I came to conclusion that I should study civil engineering. But this is not all what my uncle helped me. He also told me that I should be determined and persistent in achieving my goals. He often said that resolute determination is the truest wisdom. But I think the most important lesson I got from my uncle is to see only positive side in any occasion. One day, we didn't catch any fish and went home with empty hands. I looked at my uncle and noticed that he was smiling. I wondered why he was smiling as I didn't see any reasons to be happy. Then he said: "We didn't catch any fish, but we had a great time. I don't see any reasons to be unhappy." I admire his attitude. He is always grateful to everything he has and is truly happy.

Uncle Marat is the person who made an impact on my life. After that holiday I changed my lifestyle and attitude. I used to spend a lot of time in front of computer, playing games and surfing the net. Now I spend more time studying, playing football and going out with my friends. I learned a lot of things which were new to me. I became more serious, optimistic and mature. During the time I spent with him I also learned that no matter how smart I am or how much I know, there is always more to learn or experience. I'm grateful to him that he helped me to find out who I am and what I want.

>> nice post =) ,, i just edited some of it,,i hope... i helped you .. improve this post.. <<
itsjustme   
Dec 12, 2009
Undergraduate / "my family belongs to a catholic religion" [7]

..thank you for your reply..

..i would write then about how i continued my christian life with Him that helps me define as a person..

.."are there any significant experiences you have had,or accomplishments you have realized,that have helped to define as a person?"..this is the question..is my essay appropriate to the question?.you see,,I'm new here and I'm too young to enter college school next year that's why I'm having a hard time to make this..
itsjustme   
Dec 12, 2009
Undergraduate / "my family belongs to a catholic religion" [7]

My parents enrolled me in a Baptist school when I was elementary but my family belongs to a catholic religion. I started to accept Jesus as my Savior when I was in third grade but I never really understand Christian life would be. I thought if you accept Jesus as your Savior, you will be saved and that's it. As I grow older I began to get confused of what I believe in because Baptist and Catholic have differences in what they believe in and in how they worship God. I lost my way in how, what and where to believe. They both believe in one God but have differences in how they worship and believe in such things I can't understand. This situation leave me a question as I grow older which is "Why there are many religions believing in one God but have differences in worshipping Him? Where should I believe?"

I was transferred into a new school as I enter high school. It was a Christian school and at first I'm having a hard time to adjust to a new surrounding, new classmates and schoolmates and also new teachers. I soon learned to make friends and also discovered something new about Christian life. I'm still confused of what I believe in as a freshman. As a sophomore and junior, I realized that it doesn't matter what religion you have, what matters is that how Jesus save you as a sinner and how will you bring back all the glory to Him. Our principal, Ms Santos and my adviser in junior Mr. Bautista inspired me to be strong in every challenge I face and helped me to understand the question I had before. I now know the answer of this question "Why there are many religions believing in one God but have differences in worshipping Him? Where should I believe?" For me, Satan planned all of this. He doesn't want us to be with God and he is planning to separate us from him again. He would do everything to make things apart. Remember that what you believe in God is important; many people would tempt you to believe in such things and that would be the reason to lose your faith onto Him.

>> im not yet done with it..and i dont know what to write next..plzz help me or give me any suggestions what to write next..i really dont know what else will i write..ill be waiting for your replies..plss do..im planning to pass this tomorrow and i haven't finish it<<

..yay! thankz =))
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