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omaoo   
Feb 10, 2008
Undergraduate / Essay about myself, what is unique about me and what made who I am (ideas) [18]

Thank you very much. Now I am writing another essay too. However, this essay is very weird. This is the first time I encountered with this essay, please give me some suggestions to write something about it. The title is below :

If you are given 24 hours to lead a country, which country will you choose and why do you choose this country. What are you going to do to improve this country?
omaoo   
Feb 7, 2008
Undergraduate / Essay about myself, what is unique about me and what made who I am (ideas) [18]

It took nineteen years to create who I am today. Within these years, I have been given the freedom to explore the world in order to satisfy my curiosity toward all the strange and wonderful things in the world around me.

I grew up in a healthy family. I had an elder sister and a younger brother and this made my childhood days more colorful. My parents both had stable careers and this provided us with more opportunities to learn what we desired to. I remember when I was a young boy; my parents bought us a piano. I have been exploring music ever since my sister started taking piano lessons. I remembered that I were often been fascinated by the sound of the piano whenever my sister is playing the piano. I will be easily carried away by the melodies of the piano. This affected me so much that I insisted to my parents that I also wanted to learn piano. So I started my musical journey and continue it to this day. I finally completed my grade eight piano with a merit. After all the hardship I went through, success was finally shown in my result. Within these years of learning, I can either vent my anger or express my happiness through the key on the piano.

I did not end my music after I went to secondary school. There, I joined the Chinese Orchestra Society. My purpose of joining this society was to learn more about my own traditional culture's music. I took a position in strings and my musical instrument is named "erhu". It is a traditional Chinese musical instrument similar to violin. Instead of having 4 strings, an erhu only has two strings which can also produce beautiful musical notes as a violin does. It is slightly lower pitched than violin and it has two wooden knobs for tuning by turning either clockwise or counter-clockwise. I absolutely love the erhu and I have discovered that with the background in piano, I am learning with tremendous speed. My teacher said that I am bestowed with talent and asked me to keep up the good work. My diligence paid off as I was upgraded from being a member of the orchestra to a concert master. I am very proud that I am able to take up the responsibility for the orchestra. This also proved that I have leadership quality.

Besides having flying colors in my activity, I also do well in my studies. I applied for science stream in my secondary school and I am now pursuing a degree for electrical and electronic engineering under the American transfer program. I am often interested in how the computer functions. It is the curiosity that triggered my ambition of taking this course. After I complete my degree, I will have the opportunity to obtain a stable and challenging career.

I know that the road ahead will not be easy for me, but I cannot stop here. I need to move on in order to reach my goals. My success in the future lies in my own hands.
omaoo   
Jan 28, 2008
Undergraduate / Essay about myself, what is unique about me and what made who I am (ideas) [18]

ok, i will try to write something. But my essay won't be as good as the people who post here. Theirs are very great compare to mine. Give me some time to write, then I will post up for you to correct. Thank you very much for your advise. Your correction and suggestion help me a lot. Thank you very much.
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