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Dec 17, 2009
Undergraduate / 'The Tramp - Charlie Chaplin' - Common App Essay #4 Character in fiction [8]
This is a good essay. But make sure that your personality and character are revealed. Throughout the essay,you discuss just about the person who has influenced you (Mr.Charlie Chaplin), but it does not reflect your personality and character. Do not digress from the topic. Do not use the dictionary -- use your own vocabulary. They can tell when you have used it. They want a simple essay; not in the context of content but that of the word use.
Good Luck.
This is a good essay. But make sure that your personality and character are revealed. Throughout the essay,you discuss just about the person who has influenced you (Mr.Charlie Chaplin), but it does not reflect your personality and character. Do not digress from the topic. Do not use the dictionary -- use your own vocabulary. They can tell when you have used it. They want a simple essay; not in the context of content but that of the word use.
Good Luck.