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Dec 26, 2009
Undergraduate / Johns Hopkins Supplement - Why Public Health? [4]

Hi.

I liked your essay. I almost applied to JHU, but just gave up.

One thing I would like to tell you is that the intro part was somewhat weak.

I think it is better to show your strong interest in Public Health in the intro.
taylor318   
Dec 21, 2009
Undergraduate / "As a devout Catholic" - Notre Dame optional statement! [3]

Prompt: Why are you interested in attending Notre Dame? Your comments should not exceed 150 words.

If someone asks, "which college do you want to go?", I will answer without hesitation, "Notre Dame!!". As a devout Catholic, I have always chosen Notre Dame as my number one dream school ever since I came to the United States. First, I chose Notre Dame because of its excellent academics as well as its great passion in Catholic spirit. As a senior in high school, I have heard wonderful things about Notre Dame's education and atmosphere from current students and alumni. Also, as a student who wants to major in science, I am more than interested in studying at the digital visualization theater in the Jordan Hall of Science. Another factor that made Notre Dame very attractive to me was its beautiful campus. As soon as I saw the Gold Dome I know that in this environment I would feel encouraged to work hard and to the best of my abilities.

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