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Dec 26, 2009
Undergraduate / "I'm not afraid of falling into my inkpot" --Princeton essay [4]

I feel you could maybe add some imagery to the introduction in order to catch the reader right off the bat, because the rest of your essay has lots of it. Maybe add a quote of what your mother would of told you, it may make it more personal.

Check out my essay if you get a chance