Undergraduate / " My African Safari Adventure" - COMMON APP. ABOUT ME ESSAY [3]

I like this essay a lot.

One thing I want to correct as someone who focuses on African History and current events-

Kruger Natl. Park is on the border with Mozambique in Eastern S. Africa many miles from Botswana.
Perhaps, if he was mentioning S. Botswana he spoke of Mokolodi Nature Reserve?