Undergraduate / 'what type of leadership you portray' - RA Leadership Essay [6]

Yes no problem! I'm working on it now!

Undergraduate / GEORGIA TECH ESSAY: "My First True Love" [3]

Great Essay! I think I would elaborate on how Damascus is known for farms and Ford pick-up trucks. Other than that, I love it!

Can you please look at my summer research outline? I would greatly appreciate it!

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Undergraduate / 'experiences with various cultures' - Penn State Personal [6]

I think there is a little bit of unfocus in your essay, You jump from topic to topic without an easy transition. I think I would pick either one of your experiences and develop an essay that reflects how that experience will help you at Penn State. Relate the characteristics at Penn State to your specific experience. I hope this helps!

Please look at my summer research outline. I would greatly appreciate it!

Thanks!!

Scholarship / 'my enthusiasm for medicine and science' - Application for NIH internship. [2]

I like it! I don't know if there is a limit on words but if you can I would suggest you give an example of one of the things you saw volunteering at the dental clinic. Otherwise I like it a lot.

Please, I would need your help. Can you look at my summer research essay. I would sincerely appreciate this!!