Undergraduate / Why Macalster? Ideas popping into my head.... [2]

where to start. Mac and I are literally made for each other. As opposed to what, figuratively? This is unnecessary.

I can learn most from people with believesbeliefs and values differently from my own and showed me the importance of culture.

the world- that deservers typo - deserves another "pop".

Not just is that a characteristic that Mac and I share Not only is this a characteristic etc

but I believe a Mac experience would provide me with more skills What, you don't have any yet? :)

I stilled my desire to experience life in India but my trip made me hungry for more. I'm not entirely sure what you mean by this one.

South Africa and Tanzania makesmake the top of my list, but Thailand and Peru come right beneath.Maybe change this to "follow closely"?

I want to go to a school no comma here where students not justonly love their own school but to a school where nobody To me, "no one" sounds more formal than "nobody", but that may be just me. is afraid to constantly challenge

Attracted by the College's environmental conscientiousness, it is the liberal arts education that really caught my attention. Are these two things related? They seem to be just thrown together in this sentence.

my personal believebelief that within the realm of education, beauty lies in the ability to connect what seems unrelated at the first sight. Then connect the above for me!

I really like this, and I like that you started and ended with the pops. You sound super excited, which I'm sure the Mac dudes will totally love. Good luck!