tomjohnson373
Dec 30, 2009
Undergraduate / "I am not legally able to vote yet" - Stanford Essays [28]
Hey, I'm in California Youth and Government too! And i'm also applying to Stanford this year... small world..
Anyways, I think what this essay might need is a short relation to how this could help you outside of Youth and Government. For instance, it you say you have an "interest in law", where can this intellectual experience help you in your goal to learn more about law at Stanford?
I know you probably don't have many characters left but I feel that Stanford not only wants to hear about your experience but how it relates to your goals and aspirations. So far it's really good, make it pop.
Of course this is only a suggestion, so take it or trash it!! haha
- John
Hey, I'm in California Youth and Government too! And i'm also applying to Stanford this year... small world..
Anyways, I think what this essay might need is a short relation to how this could help you outside of Youth and Government. For instance, it you say you have an "interest in law", where can this intellectual experience help you in your goal to learn more about law at Stanford?
I know you probably don't have many characters left but I feel that Stanford not only wants to hear about your experience but how it relates to your goals and aspirations. So far it's really good, make it pop.
Of course this is only a suggestion, so take it or trash it!! haha
- John