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Posts by gunbladerq
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Last Post: Jan 23, 2010
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Jan 16, 2010
Undergraduate / Girls, Girls, Girls- Common Short Essay [21]

This essay is really something else.

Some parts of the essay were really redundant such as

You know, I'de simply copy and paste girl 249 times (not 250 times cuz like, I had to write it once first, right? and then if I pasted it 249 times I'de get 250 words. Smart, huh?) but copy-pasting so many times is damn painful. I mean, you have to hold Ctrl with your pinky and viciously punch V so many times...Its like finger-murder, okay?

It would stand but maybe not in good way.
gunbladerq   
Jan 5, 2010
Undergraduate / My mission to give back to struggling communities; My Tutoring Experience [7]

I kinda agree with xoxsueshixox.

You story of your observation and experience is pretty good but you left out how that tutoring experience is important to you. That is what matters, in my opinion.

Just work on what you learned from that experience.
gunbladerq   
Jan 4, 2010
Undergraduate / Born scientifically inclined, I was, and still am, fascinated by the world around me - USC essay [13]

hi Everybody. I really some honest feedback from anyone who reads my essay. The prompt for the USC short essay is : Describe your academic interests and how you plan to pursue them at USC. Please feel free to address your first- and second-choice major selections.

Every time an airplane flew pass my house, I would run outside and admire it in awe. Born scientifically inclined, I was, and still am, fascinated by aerial transportation. Many a time, I would construct origami paper planes, build space shuttle models and even design rockets on my computer. My passion for aeronautics kept on expanding while growing up and not just boxed up at home. During Secondary School, I volunteered in a Rocket Launching Competition. The exposure and experience I receive bolstered my interest even more.

I intend to major in Mechanical Engineering with a minor in Aerospace. Having one of the nation's best engineering programs, the University of Southern California's engineering curriculum has won me over. I look forward to courses such as AME 308 Computer-Aided Analysis for Aero-Mechanical Design which ties technology with design. Moreover, knowledge is at every corner in USC. With 23 libraries filled with thousands of books at USC, I bet my mind will never go hungry again. If admitted to the University of Southern California, I look forward to joining the Design/Build/Fly team to expose myself to real-world applications of aeronautics. With multifarious resources at USC and a diverse student body, I bet I will learn new and interesting things every day while maturing as a worldly engineer.

I used a magnet to attract all the pins and needles that fell on the carpet. Born scientifically inclined, I was, and still am, fascinated by the world around me. Many a times, I would solve my problems with a scientific and systematic approach. My interest in science and technology expanded with my first personal computer. The possibilities were endless.
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