quan
Feb 28, 2010
Undergraduate / "environment design", Cornell transfer- reasons for transferring and objectives [3]
Hi, everyone
This is my transfer essay for Cornell. Please help me with my English and content. ANY feedback would be greatly appreciated.
prompt: provide a statement (250 words minimum)that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.
Where would be my ideal college? I began to think about this question after a semester in my current university. Attending a university away from my family, I have learnt much and experienced many new things: I benefited most from growing independent and becoming strong.
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Hi, everyone
This is my transfer essay for Cornell. Please help me with my English and content. ANY feedback would be greatly appreciated.
prompt: provide a statement (250 words minimum)that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.
Where would be my ideal college? I began to think about this question after a semester in my current university. Attending a university away from my family, I have learnt much and experienced many new things: I benefited most from growing independent and becoming strong.
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