Undergraduate / 'Meaningful soccer game' - Common App Short Essay (Soccer) [2]

In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer).

Out of all the activities I have pursued, soccer holds the most meaning to me. Ever since the age of six, it has been my passion. Exciting and vigorous varsity soccer has marked my last four years of high school. I have played on many successful clubs and have attended several prestigious academies. Soccer provides an outlet; While I am playing, I forget about the pressures of everyday life, whether it be school or family issues. To me, soccer is the metaphor of life. It represents life the way most of the world sees it: achievements being due to hard work, but impacted by uncertainties. I hope to continue playing throughout my college experience, not only to make it more meaningful, but because it fulfills me as a person.

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Thanks,
Daniel