Undergraduate / 1 How did you first learn of Smith College and why are you applying?(100 words) [3]

1 How did you first learn of Smith College and why are you applying? (Limit response to 100 words.)

I first learnt about Smith College on the internet over a year ago, and I was not interested in applying to a women's college. However, after some more research into Smith's rigorous study programs and its multicultural learning environment, I changed my mind. Since my goal is to become a teacher, it is important to master the knowledge for a subject and be well rounded at the same time. I believe the educational experience at Smith would sharpen my critical thinking ability and develop my professional skills. Aside from the advanced resources and dedicated faculties, the extensive collection of literature and arts would help to enrich my bustling academic life.

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