Writing Feedback / my mother Pamela Miller, need help. descriptive essay :) [2]

Descriptive essay. #350 words. Write a description of a person you know well. need help ASAP please.

After leaving work everyday from the tiring job as vice president of Clariden leu, through all the hard work she has done to get to the position she's at, Pamela still finds the time to jog. As tall as a leprechaun and as cute as a button, it's very hard not to laugh at her when she is the one giving you orders at work, or watching her win a 10 mile marathon. Her children and friend's know her a "marathon junkie", she has made it her habit.

Eventually coming home to do the usual motherly duties...cooks, help with homework, boss around and then to finally find her place at her laptop. Pamela has the eccentric daily obsession of playing games of scrabble which seems to be her only sanity alongside catching up with her weekly shows. "Go to bed", you eventually would hear, "Good night, I love you angel".

To awake to her pleasant aroma every morning as she tells everyone, "time to get up", leaving to start a new day as "the boss". Down the stairs for work as her long flowing black hair soft as cotton flowing down her back, her sharp suit and heels. She has the softest hands due to her high authority of demanding everyone including her own children to do everything for her as she hugs you as tight as a bear and kisses us bye. People actually enjoy doing these things for her, as she is one of the most dependable, and efficient human beings I know on the face of the earth. As a mother of three she barely has time for herself, but what can I say? She puts it on herself, as secretary of the PTA; winner of all steak out competitions she is very hard-working. She cannot be replaced or compared to; she is as special and authentic to her family as a nut is to a squirrel, my mother Pamela Miller.

Undergraduate / fascinated in art, ( goals & future plans ) [4]

Hi need a proofreader.. =) por favor The title is your future goals and career .

Since I was a child, I was always fascinated in art. It wasn't until a few years ago I came to love pottery and photography. I love the complete control you have to sculpt an endless possibility if things from a solid block of clay; or by one step to the left or right can change your entire view on something giving you a new angle awaiting to be captured. Someone once told me life is just like a painting. It takes time to create your perfect piece, but even then it has a couple of flaws. Every person I meet leaves a mark on me and I do the same for them. Once I grow up I am what my creator has painted me to be, beautiful, with still a few flaws. From hearing this I was inspired to attain a career in art; where I can express my artistic talent. Where every piece I create will leave a mark on another person, hopefully brightening that person's painting.

As I got older I came to realize that there are so many forms of art out there that I have not yet had the opportunity of trying. I cant narrow down my major yet because of this. My goal is to try all of these forms, to find which I love the most. In doing this, I believe The College of the Bahamas can help me achieve that. With its excellent art program, I would be honored to start my journey at your school.

In the future I plan to open a pastry store. I love decorating cakes, and the College of the Bahamas can help me fulfill this dream with its art, baking and pastry courses.

Another dream I hope to one day fulfill is to form an organization that works along with the government to step by step beautify our Bahamaland. As a citizen of this country, I honestly do not believe Nassau is an appealing place to the eye. Therefore it is my missions to one day recapture that beauty.

With the experience and knowledge I gain from The College of the Bahamas I can gain a career ill love for the rest of my life. I want to excel. I am determined to push myself in all ways to succeed and fulfill my creative dream, to make something of my life.