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Jan 22, 2010
Poetry / She glistens as the water glistens; Water Poem [3]

Just looking for comments/thoughts.thanks!

She glistens as the water glistens.
Save the ostentatious, no, she
Is not a diamond.
She is far more delicate.
For Lady Diamond proclaims, for all to see,
"Look at how lovely I am!"
Look at my radiance! Look, World, at
How I glisten!
And World watches. And World gawks and
Applauds loudly and whispers coolly and
Secretly envies and hates.
No. She is not a diamond.
She glistens as the water glistens.
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