supergirl
Jan 29, 2010
supergirl
Jan 25, 2010
Poetry / Poem on 5 senses (dream theme) [11]
Dream, like the flowing river without an end
Melody, the cheer of crowds, might as well be
My best friend
The raising of audience, can't you see?
Are always there for me
taste of love is like
Vanilla ice cream on a summer day
The feeling, is the
Warmth of the fire in a winter storm
Been success is not always about money.
what can i add to make my poem more complete
Dream, like the flowing river without an end
Melody, the cheer of crowds, might as well be
My best friend
The raising of audience, can't you see?
Are always there for me
taste of love is like
Vanilla ice cream on a summer day
The feeling, is the
Warmth of the fire in a winter storm
Been success is not always about money.
what can i add to make my poem more complete
supergirl
Jan 24, 2010
Poetry / Poem on 5 senses (dream theme) [11]
does this sound gud
Taste of love is like
Vanilla icecream on a summer day
does this sound gud
Taste of love is like
Vanilla icecream on a summer day
supergirl
Jan 24, 2010
supergirl
Jan 23, 2010
Poetry / Poem on 5 senses (dream theme) [11]
hey!!
i have a poem on the 5 senses n its has to be about a "dream"
i realy need help ( i suck at poetry)
here is wat i have written so far
Dream is the smooth success of life like the river flowing without and end.
My voice ,going like a melody, croweds cheer
Raising of audience
Pink,red roese just for me
The smell of money is like a cake baking in the oven
The feeling of success is as warm as the heat form the fire in a winter storm
Walking on the pass of hapinnes is like walking on a rainbow
PLZ HELP !!!!!!! IT DUE ON MONDAY!!1
hey!!
i have a poem on the 5 senses n its has to be about a "dream"
i realy need help ( i suck at poetry)
here is wat i have written so far
Dream is the smooth success of life like the river flowing without and end.
My voice ,going like a melody, croweds cheer
Raising of audience
Pink,red roese just for me
The smell of money is like a cake baking in the oven
The feeling of success is as warm as the heat form the fire in a winter storm
Walking on the pass of hapinnes is like walking on a rainbow
PLZ HELP !!!!!!! IT DUE ON MONDAY!!1