t_m_c
Feb 4, 2010
Undergraduate / Life is a climb, but the view is great - University of Texas [4]
Hello, Names Taylor
I am applying to University of Texas for fall quarter! I have written a essay, any feedback that you can give back will be great thanks. :)
Promt: How will the University of Texas help you achive your overall goals?
As a hardworking, and self conscious individual I feel that my academic potential is at unprecedented heights, and being accepted to Texas University will only increase that potential. Most people have a one track mind; they want to be doctors, lawyers, or teachers. I want to major in something that provides many options and opportunities. Graduating from a reputable college is important to me; and Texas University can help me to achieve this.
After graduating from high school a year ago, I have thought more about my college education, my personal goals, and my professional goals. When I think about the last five years, I have to say that my expectation of college education gets more and more clearer, while my personal goals evolve gradually from uncertain to definite.
Texas University offers a comprehensive curriculum, which is basic of advanced education and significant for the build of my individual character; however, as far as specific scientific and occupational career concerned, college education of superficial knowledge of specific fields is far from enough. Undoubtedly, there is still a long way for to my graduation, whether it is work experience or further educations. Thus, I am supposed to find my true interest, my field, and my values-during the four years to come. I believe that is the invaluable gift from my college education at Texas University.
Throughout the years, I have become increasingly interested in the field of sciences, Environmental Science, and Pre -Medical is what I am considering, carefully, for my major. The medical field appeals to me because I want to have direct contact with people and their problems. I feel that is the best way I can be truly involved, and make a difference in their lives. From my thorough research for universities that could enrich and prepare me for medicine, I discovered that Texas University is one of the highly distinguished schools. Knowing this, I have no doubts that Texas University would greatly assist me in achieving my goals.
My goals are crystal clear and I feel that I can reach best by getting the quality education that Texas University can provide. While I am attending Texas University I plan to pursue a Bachelors of Science Degree. After the education I will take from Texas University, I hope to transfer to The University of San Francisco School of Medicine and later on continue graduate school. I hope to use the skills I've learned from my experiences and become a great physician. I understand that achieving my dreams is extremely difficult, but as long as I hold on to them and give it my best, everything is possible.
I believe that Texas University will help me broaden my knowledge in academics and mold my character fully. I know that Texas University has an exceptional reputation and continues to set itself apart from other universities. I hope to become part of the University to impart my talents and abilities as an individual to the vast student body.
Hello, Names Taylor
I am applying to University of Texas for fall quarter! I have written a essay, any feedback that you can give back will be great thanks. :)
Promt: How will the University of Texas help you achive your overall goals?
As a hardworking, and self conscious individual I feel that my academic potential is at unprecedented heights, and being accepted to Texas University will only increase that potential. Most people have a one track mind; they want to be doctors, lawyers, or teachers. I want to major in something that provides many options and opportunities. Graduating from a reputable college is important to me; and Texas University can help me to achieve this.
After graduating from high school a year ago, I have thought more about my college education, my personal goals, and my professional goals. When I think about the last five years, I have to say that my expectation of college education gets more and more clearer, while my personal goals evolve gradually from uncertain to definite.
Texas University offers a comprehensive curriculum, which is basic of advanced education and significant for the build of my individual character; however, as far as specific scientific and occupational career concerned, college education of superficial knowledge of specific fields is far from enough. Undoubtedly, there is still a long way for to my graduation, whether it is work experience or further educations. Thus, I am supposed to find my true interest, my field, and my values-during the four years to come. I believe that is the invaluable gift from my college education at Texas University.
Throughout the years, I have become increasingly interested in the field of sciences, Environmental Science, and Pre -Medical is what I am considering, carefully, for my major. The medical field appeals to me because I want to have direct contact with people and their problems. I feel that is the best way I can be truly involved, and make a difference in their lives. From my thorough research for universities that could enrich and prepare me for medicine, I discovered that Texas University is one of the highly distinguished schools. Knowing this, I have no doubts that Texas University would greatly assist me in achieving my goals.
My goals are crystal clear and I feel that I can reach best by getting the quality education that Texas University can provide. While I am attending Texas University I plan to pursue a Bachelors of Science Degree. After the education I will take from Texas University, I hope to transfer to The University of San Francisco School of Medicine and later on continue graduate school. I hope to use the skills I've learned from my experiences and become a great physician. I understand that achieving my dreams is extremely difficult, but as long as I hold on to them and give it my best, everything is possible.
I believe that Texas University will help me broaden my knowledge in academics and mold my character fully. I know that Texas University has an exceptional reputation and continues to set itself apart from other universities. I hope to become part of the University to impart my talents and abilities as an individual to the vast student body.
