milan2003_07
May 10, 2010
Writing Feedback / Mrs. More: Describe a person you most admire, and the impact they had on you [2]
Please, check the Tenses you have used in your essay. In several phrases you are mixing them by using Present Tenses and then suddenly switching to Past Tenses. This does not work!!!
Please, check the Tenses you have used in your essay. In several phrases you are mixing them by using Present Tenses and then suddenly switching to Past Tenses. This does not work!!!