Book Reports / Powerful Afghani women in "A Thousand Splendid Suns" thesis help [5]

I am doing a research paper on the taliban's rule over the women of afghanistan but am not sure if my thesis statement is arguable enough. It would also help if my thesis was three points but I am really only stuck on two. (Life at home and life in public) Here is what i have so far--

Khaled Houssini's novel, A Thousand Splendid Suns, depicts the effects of the taliban's oppressive rule over the white washed Afghani women as seen in and out of the public eye.

Khaled Houssini's A thousand Splendid Suns, depicts the harsh restrictions on Afghani women after the rise of the Taliban domination.