rbu19
Feb 28, 2010
Undergraduate / "a better insight into life at BU" - any other ideas? [8]
yup a 100-120 word limit.
thank you so much for your help!
yup a 100-120 word limit.
thank you so much for your help!
rbu19
Feb 28, 2010
Undergraduate / "a better insight into life at BU" - any other ideas? [8]
thank you so much all of you! i will post a new version once im done editing :)
@ 2010 trans: you mentioned that it does not make me stand out. any ideas on how i can improve?
thank you so much all of you! i will post a new version once im done editing :)
@ 2010 trans: you mentioned that it does not make me stand out. any ideas on how i can improve?
rbu19
Feb 27, 2010
Undergraduate / "a better insight into life at BU" - any other ideas? [8]
In five or six sentences, tell us how you first became interested in BU and what steps you have taken to learn more about us.
September 2007 of my senior year was more demanding than usual: tight IB coursework deadlines, intense SATs preparation and attending countless presentations by university admissions directors. It was 30 degrees outside and as I walked in to the auditorium one afternoon, I immediately regretted my decision to attend this event as the air-conditioners were under repair. Little did I know that this particular thirty-minute visual on BU had the power to capture my mind and spirit. I had made my decision. I had to be part of the BU community. After thoroughly exploring the school's website and keeping in contact with the admissions office, I learnt that BU was the right fit for me. Furthermore, over the past year, I have gained a better insight into life at BU through experiences of my high-school classmates.
is this good enough? should i totally change the idea or just edit it?
please help. thanks
In five or six sentences, tell us how you first became interested in BU and what steps you have taken to learn more about us.
September 2007 of my senior year was more demanding than usual: tight IB coursework deadlines, intense SATs preparation and attending countless presentations by university admissions directors. It was 30 degrees outside and as I walked in to the auditorium one afternoon, I immediately regretted my decision to attend this event as the air-conditioners were under repair. Little did I know that this particular thirty-minute visual on BU had the power to capture my mind and spirit. I had made my decision. I had to be part of the BU community. After thoroughly exploring the school's website and keeping in contact with the admissions office, I learnt that BU was the right fit for me. Furthermore, over the past year, I have gained a better insight into life at BU through experiences of my high-school classmates.
is this good enough? should i totally change the idea or just edit it?
please help. thanks
