Essays / Critique for My thesis - Animals do have rights [7]

Thanks for yr comments but you have misunderstood my paragrraph (hawk054) has no connection with the one posted first by SceneGirl1213. :))

Essays / Critique for My thesis - Animals do have rights [7]

Accurate knowledge of a subject is important as a basis for thorough decision-making. That is how I find one, which most suits me, which I like most and want to specialize on. Studying all subjects at the same level, knowing core ideas of all of them, allows me to compare them in the best possible way and based on thorough judgment choose the most favorable ones for me. It is an old technique following me through whole life from the very beginning of my educational way.

Would you pls comment how good or bad it is???