Writing Feedback / Ways to spend less money - essay [6]

Taman Pelangi,
53200 Johor Bahru.

Jay:
I have been long time does not communicate with you but i glad to hear you have fine at your country.Last week, you write a letter about you have stretch yours ringgit as prices of goods have gone up.Luckily, I have attended a save your ringgit session run by the State Consumer Department yesterday, this programme have teaches me many ways to spend less and save money each month.

First and foremost, you should downsizing spending in every month....

Sincerely,

________
(XXX)

Please help correct this essay and replace it with a better words...Thanks

Writing Feedback / Everyone should have a person who you interested (my nephew) [4]

Can you all help me mark and correct this essay as fast as you can...

Everyone should have a person who you interested.

In this case, i would like to talk about my youngest brother in my family.Without he i would not be as happy as i am now.

He is 6 years old already and he is study in a kindergarden that near my house.Although he is 6 yeaars old ,he looks thin and short because he does not like to take dinner as well as he can.He has a smooth pale skin and cheek.His favourite action is bite his own finger this action cause he looks adorable.He is looking smart also when he is studying ,actually he is naughty than a monkey.

He is courageous kid.My nephew looks big,strong and like to bully he but my brother will try to revenge him back also.He is person can make you stay at home as long as you can because when you facing he,you just want to play with he and does not go out with friend.He looks energetic also,he is always trying play games with my family that is why my father ask me play with he always.

Although he is naughty,i am still love he forever.Everyone should take care person who you interested.