yuda123
Apr 3, 2010
Writing Feedback / Positive steps that you and I can take to tackle climate change [4]
guys, I wrote this essay for my term assessment. Can u guys please check for details, including the grammar, vocab, and sentence structure.
Thanks a lot
What positive steps can you or I start to take to tackle climate change?
What is the first thing that comes into your mind when you hear the word "Climate Change"? Most people will answer "global warming", the increasing of the temperature on earth's surface. This global warming will cause the climate change, which is dangerous for human being. Climate change has occurred in many places in all over the world.
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guys, I wrote this essay for my term assessment. Can u guys please check for details, including the grammar, vocab, and sentence structure.
Thanks a lot
What positive steps can you or I start to take to tackle climate change?
What is the first thing that comes into your mind when you hear the word "Climate Change"? Most people will answer "global warming", the increasing of the temperature on earth's surface. This global warming will cause the climate change, which is dangerous for human being. Climate change has occurred in many places in all over the world.
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