Writing Feedback / Essay about "My weekend". [3]

Hi ..

I was asked to write an essay about my weekend and it has to be between (100-200) words. I would appreciate it if any one review my draft essay and give me a comment.

Thank you.

In the weekends, some people go to visit their relatives or shopping or even go to trips, but some people don't do anything. This weekend was different from any other weekend, because my family decided to go for a trip to the mountains and spend our day there.

Firstly, we prepared what we needed from food and drinks. Because it was in winter, we took our umbrellas and jackets. After that, we get dressed and went to the mountain. When we arrived to our small house in the mountain we put our things in the house and my mother started to unpack the food and cook the meal. My sisters helped my mother while my brothers helped my father with collecting wood. On the other hand, me and my little brother and sister went for an adventure to explore the place and I took my camera with me to take photos for the mountains. When we finished our adventure my mother finished cooking and we gathered together to eat our meal and we played many games after that.

This weekend was exiting for our family and we enjoyed it and hope I can go there again.

196 words..