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Joined: May 15, 2010
Last Post: May 24, 2010
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Smira Roberts   
May 24, 2010
Poetry / Glass: My first Free Verse Poetry....your thoughts [10]

oh haha...

pieces echoes its uncertainty...

at least thats what I think its supposed to be...

thanks guys..

From: Smira Roberts

I have a question ( its kind of random ) - I just wanted to confirm whether or not English is the only offical language in U.S?

I'm up in Canada..so I'm not sure...some say Spanish and English .. others just say English...:P

from smira xox
Smira Roberts   
May 23, 2010
Research Papers / Why Freemason's added to the Design of the Dollar Bill [7]

Hey.. I might not be any good to you guys but whats the risk?
You might want to google search some of these key words concerning the dollar bill and the epic free mason connections
1. Why were there to sides to The Great Seal when only one was officially used in documents

2. Repeated use of the number 13

3. Eye of providence - the all seeing eye; the idea that th top of the pyramid will be fabicated on it once America truly becomes what its supposed to be

4. Ben Franklin influence in the first comity when designing the fist dollar bill

5. 6 sided star reference on top of the pyramid

6. Was it a phoneix or an eagle

7. Annuit Coeptus Novous Ordus Seclorum - when alligned with 6 pointed star , it points to the letters: A,S,N,O,S,M = Masons

8. Date Illumati was fomed: 1776 (MDCCXXLVI = 666

9. And thats about all

Dont mind me, i'm not a conspiracy theorist...i just happened to watch a documentary on the masons and their influence in the making of the American Dollar Bill ( am i scarying you yet...lol)

Anyways that all I got, I hope that helps you..

From; Smira ( the NON- conspiracy theorist), xox
Smira Roberts   
May 23, 2010
Poetry / Glass: My first Free Verse Poetry....your thoughts [10]

awwwwwwwwwwwe thanks ..thats really sweet of you <3

I wasn't sure whether or not I should add commas, I guess I dont have too worry about that. Thanks for the advice. It was my fist poetry pieces. Honestly, I was kind of hesitating when I was posting it up, (poetry is a personal thing for me..) but im happy you guys enjoy it.. but kevin...do you have a suggestion for a title

from: smira, xox
Smira Roberts   
May 22, 2010
Poetry / Glass: My first Free Verse Poetry....your thoughts [10]

awwwwwwwwwe...thanks !!
hahah ive been thinking about it though but i havent really got anything yet....

dont wory it'll come through....

thanks bob..

from smira, xox
Smira Roberts   
May 21, 2010
Poetry / Glass: My first Free Verse Poetry....your thoughts [10]

To: Jd87rh

Thanks! I'm not a poet either but i am trying. As for your advice, i think i'll go ahead and try it. Seems like a reasonable thing to do...

Do you have any idea of what I should call it?

From: Smira, xox
Smira Roberts   
May 21, 2010
Poetry / Glass: My first Free Verse Poetry....your thoughts [10]

Hey guys...
i'm writing my very first journal entry but im not quite sure if everything is just about right. please read it and let me know your thoughts and suggestion--> it would be so awesome :)

from smira, xoxo

P.S i got no title so if u have any recommendations ...go for it

GLASS POEM

glass
speaks silently to hear itself
never whispering its thoughts
so afraid the break the strongest sound
which knowlingly paints the reflection

language understandable to the heart
stealing its own innocence with every breath
still and immovable

reminding the obvious with its deceiving colors
controlling what is not even there
features of a statue that opens the eye
concealed to remember the lyrics to the song
focused like the hunter and the hunted

broken it remains reckless
single to which is not handwoven
pieces echoes it uncertainty
which swiftly churns with guilt
unbearable to the ear

Yet they stare so loud
consuming the sympathy of a raindrop
heedless in its direction
arrogant is its sharpness that reveals
everything i ever wanted

confident it keeps the answer
to find itself cheating
screaming what was right
it mimics the shape of what seems to vital
that of mere touch
an expression

pieces glued together seemingly
solidified matchless attraction
of what was made by
YOU
Smira Roberts   
May 17, 2010
Faq, Help / EF Contributing is AWESOME...so how do i become one??!! [10]

From Smira, xoxo
I was wondering how one can become an EF Contributer!!
cause its soo awesome!! I mean I like contributing anyway but is there like some kind of spooky test you have to pass?

If you can reply I would greatly appreciate it !!

P.S = sorry kevin...haha...i had no more faces I can think of !!

Bye Bye
Smira Roberts   
May 16, 2010
Research Papers / Help for a Challenges and Changes In Society Research Paper [6]

Opps Kevin...
Ohh, I forgot to mention that we are required to write down questions within our responses that analyze the anthropological, sociological or psychological aspect of our response....

sorry :)

(my happy fcae is sort of different --> :), :-) !!
Smira Roberts   
May 16, 2010
Research Papers / Help for a Challenges and Changes In Society Research Paper [6]

Hi Kevin :)
Thanks soo much on the advice...it really helped allot; I came acroos some very controversial articles yesterday that i found quite interesting actually...and sooooooo ( sorry for th extra "O's", my keybooard is kind of messed up..lol),

I chose to write about the the proposal of having black-focused schools in the Toronto District School Board...I hope u like it...haha..If you see anything odd or improper, go ahead and point it out.. I'm willing to take any suggestions:) Thank you soo much...

Appreciate the help Kevin!

In regards to the proposal of having black-focused schools in the Toronto District School Board, I feel that this is not a great idea and will eventually lead to the emergence of a different standard and wrong approach of success.

Although the idea of having a more "culturally based school" can actually lead to better self esteem in terms of equality and fairness, it is not representing what the child will soon face after he/she graduates from high school. In a modern day society, you can almost guarantee that one would face some type of inequality or racism in his/her lifetime whether it is in the financial, healthcare, judicial, and even the education system.

Question: Is it even fairer that black children are not prepared to face these challenges because they were placed in a school where, in this case, everyone would theoretically be the same, therefore being treated equally? Hypothetically, I think the real problem of the proposal lies in trying to balance, what should happen theoretically (that everyone should be treated equally and fairly with no regard to colour), and what might possibly happen in reality (that one will face discrimination and inequality at least once in his/her lifetime).

Some argue that the idea of having black-focused schools is appropriate because it will allow the curriculum to be more focused on Black Heritage, Black Struggles, and Black Achievements within their culture. Quite frankly, I agree that the curriculum does not focus enough on black history; instead black history just becomes scrapped down to a couple of inventers and the slave trade. The current curriculum reminds us in great detail to remember the Jewish holocaust. Personally, I had two field trips dedicated to the remembrance of the Jewish holocaust and numerous assignments related to the sufferings, and the success as a Jewish culture. Yet in that very same history class, there just over a mere hour spent on gradually skimming through the notable events in black history.

Unmistakeably, there is a discrepancy in value within the curriculum that should be solved. However, I believe this issue can be solved by establishing a more compacted curriculum that recalls a more developed and enhanced account of black history. By having black students placed in an entirely separate school, the importance of black history will diminished and will still fail to be recognized equally in public schools.

W hat I find quite ridiculous is the perception that all "black" people have the same history and culture. We are not distinguishing between West African Black, East African Black, North African Black, South African Black or African American Black history. That itself is a problem that needs to be resolved

It is evident that the idea of having black-focused schools in the Toronto District school Board will result in satisfaction for some and backlash for others. It will obviously be a very controversial topic with the months to come. There are still many questions that should be critically analyzed if the school board does decide to take part in the proposal.

Questions: Do race Based institutional ideas illustrate an elementary blemish in our society's deep-seated values and beliefs? Does it belittle the efforts made by many Activists who combated for equality for those of colours? Are we socially changing the purpose of a black student's success? Are we socially introducing the emergence of what essentially is the, differentiation of White achievement and Black achievement?

(P.S: I guess by now you've realized you have approached the end...:)
Smira Roberts   
May 15, 2010
Research Papers / The short and long term effects of the Russian revolution - history [6]

I. The 1905 Revolution
II. February Revolution
III. The October Revolution/The Struggle For Power and the Rise of the Bolsheviks

I believe there were three revolutions

As for what stopped Russia from evolving into a democratic country, im not sure!

From: Smira, xox
Smira Roberts   
May 15, 2010
Research Papers / Help for a Challenges and Changes In Society Research Paper [6]

So I'm taking a challenges and change course and I have to write a research essay about any topics i would like; as long as it follows only one discipline ( anthropology., soc., or psych.)

There are so many choice and I'm quite overwhelmed!!...I guess i'm afraid that if i do pick a topic, I would fail to only relate it to one discipline...lol

I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions as to what topic I should write about and how the possible thesis could look like...i would gladly appreciate it!!

From: Smira, the new-comer
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