Essays / Question on Style - dividing points to paragraphs? [4]

to answer your first point i would use two paragraphs, it makes the people reading it less likely to think that your relevant points are just run on sentences

the second point - use a connecting sentence that makes the second paragraph relevant. it would also be good if you made the two paragraphs slightly different in terms of their points.

Hope that helped,

John

Research Papers / "how music effects math skills," what thesis statement for research paper [4]

The repetitive and mathematical nature of music lends credence to the view that those skilled in music are also innately skilled in mathematics