Undergraduate / "a love for science" - Statement of Purpose [6]

I trying to transfer to University of Texas can someone help me out with my essay? I know its really bad

Through my life I had always had a love for science. I have always been particularly interested in the science of life, biology. I was always fascinated in every aspect of science of life. I have been interested in everything from the smallest organism to complex creatures such as elephants to bizarre plants. Everything about life in general was fascinating. As I was growing up I wanted to learn more, during school I would ask my teacher millions of questions and constantly amazed looking at the small organisms the microscope. As continued to go to school, I discovered that I was pretty intrigued by the biology of humans. I discovered this during when I was taking human anatomy and physiology in community college. Everything from human biology excites me from human evolution to how the brain works. I had always sought to learn more. I found out that the University of Texas has the option to major in human biology, I was thrilled, and it is truly the best opportunity to reach my aspiration. With this major I hopefully use my knowledge to educate my community and make an impact.

I'm not the typical student; I went to school part-time, work full-time and took a year off. When I graduated from high school, I attended Brazosport College. I have to confess, I struggled at the beginning, and I had trouble with math and other subjects. As time went on, I realized that I had to focus in order to accomplish my goals. My grades went up and I started to gain confidence. After three long years, I received my associate's degree in general science. I decided to take a break from school because I was unsure what I wanted to do. During this break and decided to pursue nursing. Nursing involved two of my goals I wanted to do; help people and chance to learn more about human body works. After my break I went back to Brazosport and complete other courses required for nursing. I did pretty well in those courses, but despite this I was accepted into any programs. I was upset, but I was not about to give up on an opportunity to learn. I decided to look the human biology program at UT, I loved it. The University of Texas is perfect for me. I love everything at UT, its tradition, its stride to be the best, and its natural sciences program. The University of Texas at Austin is a leader in research funding and spends millions each year to make certain that they have the most up to date equipment and renowned staff in Texas. This is reason I want attend University of Texas and learn from what the best world has to offer.

The University of Texas is best opportunity achieve my goals in life: to gain more knowledge and get a degree. I may not be the average student, but I think it gives me an edge, because I realize the value of an education and it's something I won't give up. With the human biology degree I hope pursue at the University of Texas, I will use my knowledge I gained and make contribution to my community and the world.

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