Undergraduate / 'chance to share Russian culture with other people there' - What qualities for UCF? [2]

thank you so much for the feedback, Kevin!!!
do you mind to check another one? ))))
What qualities or unique characteristics do you possess that would allow you to contribute to the UCF community?

Study at UCF is an exclusive opportunity to achieve my goals and to express myself. Surrounded by comfortable study environment of the University, I'm determined to gain a deeper knowledge both from theoretical and practical perspective.

Moreover, since I have been studying at the University in Russia, I can share my knowledge and experience of different educational system with students and professors at the UCF.

I think my ability to adjust to a new environment, and my capability to overcome various hardships and setbacks has influenced my communication skills, which are very important in becoming a part of the university community.

My previous study experience had taught me the ways to be efficient and curious in the learning process. It helps me to stay motivated and goal-oriented. I think such characteristics as diligent, organized and inquisitive are the key of successful education. And I truly believe that learning is more efficient than cramming.

Besides all written above, being a part of the UCF community, would give me a chance to share Russian culture with other people there and it could help strengthen cultural and social integration between USA and Russia.

Undergraduate / "the present-day world is an open world" - UCF bump in the road essay [2]

hello everyone! i'd be really appreciate if you could revise my essay.
"If there has been some obstacle or "bump in the road," in your academic or personal life, please explain the circumstances"

It is said that the present-day world is an open world. People in the modern society live more mobile and open-minded lives. A few years back I took this idea literally and moved from Russia to the States.

I was 21 years old and I was sure that anything is possible in this life as long as you know what you want. At that time I was a student with a half-way left to bachelor degree in Sociology and future life in my hometown. But I couldn't stand the idea of studying the society without knowing anything but the only place I've ever lived at. I decided I want to try something else and went to the USA.

The decision like that is not easy to make, even harder to bring it to life. Soon I found out it's not easy to start your life in the different country. Adapting to the new society was truly the challenge. But now, as never before, I was able to see different culture and new people, learn about their lifestyle. I was gaining valuable experience for my future field of study.

After I left Russia for the United States I had to take a break from school. Timeout in my study has helped me realize that to achieve my goals I have to go back to school. It was only matter of time when. I started to work full-time job to save up some money, meanwhile improving my language. The experience of living on my own has definitely influenced and evolved my communication skills, broaden my mind, helped me to become confident and responsible adult.

People could look back and say I have wasted some time, but this has been my journey in finding myself and what I have passion to do. This overall experience helped me to see the path I want to follow in my life. I cannot think of a better place than the UCF for a next step in my new life.