Posts by scubatim84

scubatim84

Jun 18, 2010

Undergraduate / Pre-Med: Transfer my study to dentistry and change of major [6]

I used to be pre-med myself, and my stepfather is a dentist, so I've done my research on these two fields. What they're looking for is first whether you can survive medical or dental school academically, and second, why you over someone else. For the first requirement, I would recommend that you try to explain in your personal statement how you can handle a massive amount of science classes without being so cut and dry as to just list your grades (since they can read your transcript for that). Second, to set yourself apart from the rest, I'm not sure I would use something such as a "lifetime goal" of wanting to become X profession because it's rather cliche and I'm sure it's very overused. You want to appear to be unique...try to think of an opening that everyone else isn't already using.

Also, are you sure that you want to be a dentist? What about a doctor? Have you shadowed either? If so, talk about that in your statement and intertwine it with your scholastic abilities to make the case that you have made an informed decision and have the brains to back it up.

Lastly, a dentist is different from an oral surgeon. A dentist is someone who completed 4 years of dental school and received either a DMD or DDS degree (there really is no difference between the two). An oral surgeon is someone who holds both an MD and a DMD or DDS, hence why they are able to perform a lot of procedures/surgeries that dentists alone can't do. So be careful to not use oral surgeon and dentist interchangeably...they aren't the same.

scubatim84

Jun 17, 2010

Undergraduate / Advice on Personal Statement for Master's of Accounting program requested [4]

I'm not going to post my resume, because I don't think it's relevant for advice on my personal statement since I'm not mentioning any prior jobs in the PS, but if you had seen it you would realize that you are mistaken. I've done accounting before when I was an office manager for several years; it was just not at the level of a CPA because it wasn't necessary. My fiancee's sister is a CPA at Ernst & Young and I've heard plenty of horror stories. On top of all that, I've worked as an EMT for several years...trust me when I say I'm used to unbearably tedious.

Would love to hear some input on the statement guys! :)

scubatim84

Jun 16, 2010

Undergraduate / Advice on Personal Statement for Master's of Accounting program requested [4]

Hey guys...I'm glad I found my way here. A brief summary of where I'm at is that I'm about to graduate from UC Davis with a degree in economics, and I'm realizing that for what I want to do (which is to go into corporate finance), I'm going to need an accounting degree and CPA. My program did not offer an accounting emphasis so a master's degree in accounting is my best option.

Right now I'm working on my personal statement and I just can't find an opening paragraph that I feel grabs the reader enough to get them to keep reading and get my point across. I don't need to try to make up for any deficiency that I can think of...my grades were fine in undergrad, 3.5, and I plan to study enough for the GMAT that hopefully my score on that will be sufficient, but I would like to give myself the best shot possible at getting into the MSA program that San Jose State offers since admissions are somewhat competitive for the program (only 25% get in).

I clarified with the program coordinator that they are specifically looking for the following questions to be answered in the PS: "Why accounting?" "Why SJSU?" "Why the MSA program?" "What traits will make you successful in this rigorous program?" Let me know what you guys think and what suggestions you would have for making a better opening (or any improvements on the statement), thanks!

Tim X XXXXXX
Personal Statement
San Jose State University
Degree Objective: MSA

My interest in accounting first developed when I decided to become involved in an area of business that required mastery for success. I cultivated this interest when I took financial accounting as part of my studies at UC Davis. My professor in that class provided an excellent introduction to this profession with his lectures, and after subsequent classes in corporate finance, I became attracted to the analytical nature of accounting and the level of detail required to be successful in that profession. I discovered that my passion would be to become a certified public accountant.

Originally, I entered college with the goal to enter a field where I could analyze large amounts of data and then use that information to provide results. I wanted a career that made a difference and pushed me to do better each time; this desire led me to major in economics. My interest in accounting grew as I studied economics. Many of the concepts I learned led back to the necessity for accurate financial information. I saw that accounting satisfied my goal for a career that produced results and made a difference to the bottom line of the company.

However, I did not have the necessary skills to go into accounting after I completed UC Davis. I desired a thorough foundation in accounting, so that when I sought employment with a Big 4 accounting firm, I could be confident in the performance of my work. After I graduated from college, I began working in Silicon Valley and researched the graduate programs that would allow me to pursue a career in accounting.

Ultimately, I decided that the MSA program at San Jose State University would be the best fit for me due to the excellent reputation it was given by the alumni I talked to, my review of the curriculum and the ability to complete an internship with an accounting firm or corporate finance group. I am convinced that I would be well-prepared to enter accounting if I completed this rigorous program due to the curriculum itself as well as the work experience I will gain during the internship.

I have always been detail-oriented and focused on accuracy in my work and in college. I have excelled academically as a result of my desire for excellence in everything that I do. I feel that attention to detail and a focus on accuracy will serve me well in accounting. I am also keenly aware of how important a high level of integrity is to this profession and I pride myself on maintaining such a level. I don't believe in shortcuts or cutting corners; I firmly believe that honesty is its own reward and is worth whatever costs are incurred as a result of embracing it. Furthermore, studying economics at UC Davis afforded me a quantitative background which I feel was sufficiently demanding to provide me the mathematical aptitude and capability to excel at accounting given the proper instruction.

After I finish my graduate studies, I plan to seek employment with a Big 4 accounting firm where I hope to gain solid experience as a staff accountant. While working, I will study for the CPA exam until I pass it and acquire the CPA designation. From there, I will decide whether to pursue a career at the firm I am employed with or acquire work as an accountant, finance manager or financial analyst at a Fortune 500 company. I hope you will give me the privilege of continuing my studies at your fine institution so that I may achieve these goals.