honey91332
Jul 15, 2010
Undergraduate / "Confessions of a poor student" [20]
Redemption.
I'm a student who's seeking academic redemption after doing poorly in college. My family
wanted expected me to become a physician; they didn't care what particular kind just as long as I made a lot of money make a big fortune. So Die to meeting their expectations, I took up chemistry and biology classes hoping eventually things like carbon atoms and anatomy would grow on me. This didn't happen; instead I was miserable which caused my grades to suffer. During this time the period, computers interested me arouse my interest. so Later, I took up computer repair and in a week's time made my first computer. A year later I completed my PC repair and Microsoft Engineer certificates and have been working the computer industry ever since. Through the years I took courses here and there so I could in order to transfer to into a university. but it was only a year ago that I took it more seriously. (I'm not quite sure if this is redundant.) Now Nowadays, something inside me says, "I want higher learning education, I want to be academically successful". Please don't view me as a student with a low GPA but as a student with potential who's had a positive change and has maintained a 4.0 GPA in his last 10 units of college coursework. My goal is to earn a Master's degree then eventually set up scholarships for deserving students who has turned their academic lives around.
This is my humble feedback on your essay. My advice is that maybe you can try writing your essay in a more formal way since you're applying to a college. :) Good luck!
Redemption.
I'm a student who's seeking academic redemption after doing poorly in college. My family
This is my humble feedback on your essay. My advice is that maybe you can try writing your essay in a more formal way since you're applying to a college. :) Good luck!
