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Aug 3, 2010
Writing Feedback / 'thank to god not being sick' IELTS - What factors are important in achieving happiness? [3]
Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why it is difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
For the human being, happiness is the most valuable achievement in their life but it is very difficult to define what the happiness is. The main reason for that is the definition of happiness is different for everyone. People from all around the world have different expectations from their life and these expectations are related to their life style and environment.
If you ask someone the meaning of happiness, he or she will pause for a time because the description of happiness is very complicated. He or she has to think about whole life and the stories that he or she had experienced before with very different feelings then he or she will decide what was the best event that made him or her happy. Also, the things that makes people are dependent to age because for a children, a toy makes them happy; for teenagers a car makes them happy..
To achieve happiness is not very hard but to defining happiness is very difficult. If people could find the meaning of being happy they will achieve happiness in a short time because they will know the route of happiness. None of the wind can help a ship if it does not know the destination.
Another very important factor being happy is thinking about worse times. When i think about my illness that i had before, i thank to god not being sick. Health always comes first for everyone who wants to be happy. For example, I will be very happy if i am the richest person on the world but i have cancer and doctors say that i have one month to live, how could i be happy..
As a result, happiness is dependent to place, age and life. We can not define happiness for everyone but everyone has stories that make them happy.
Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why it is difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
For the human being, happiness is the most valuable achievement in their life but it is very difficult to define what the happiness is. The main reason for that is the definition of happiness is different for everyone. People from all around the world have different expectations from their life and these expectations are related to their life style and environment.
If you ask someone the meaning of happiness, he or she will pause for a time because the description of happiness is very complicated. He or she has to think about whole life and the stories that he or she had experienced before with very different feelings then he or she will decide what was the best event that made him or her happy. Also, the things that makes people are dependent to age because for a children, a toy makes them happy; for teenagers a car makes them happy..
To achieve happiness is not very hard but to defining happiness is very difficult. If people could find the meaning of being happy they will achieve happiness in a short time because they will know the route of happiness. None of the wind can help a ship if it does not know the destination.
Another very important factor being happy is thinking about worse times. When i think about my illness that i had before, i thank to god not being sick. Health always comes first for everyone who wants to be happy. For example, I will be very happy if i am the richest person on the world but i have cancer and doctors say that i have one month to live, how could i be happy..
As a result, happiness is dependent to place, age and life. We can not define happiness for everyone but everyone has stories that make them happy.
