sanap
Aug 4, 2010
Graduate / "Career vision" vs. "most passionate about" - what is the difference? [10]
Thanks linmark --
Thanks linmark --
sanap
Aug 4, 2010
Undergraduate / Question about length of common application personal essay [5]
most schools ask for a 400 or a 450 word limit response.
most schools ask for a 400 or a 450 word limit response.
sanap
Aug 4, 2010
Graduate / "Career vision" vs. "most passionate about" - what is the difference? [10]
How is "tell me about your career vision?" different from "what are you most passionate about?".
The thing is when I wrote about my career vision, I almost started the essay saying "I have always been passionate about ...". So, when I saw this essay on what are you most passionate about, I just got confused.
How is "tell me about your career vision?" different from "what are you most passionate about?".
The thing is when I wrote about my career vision, I almost started the essay saying "I have always been passionate about ...". So, when I saw this essay on what are you most passionate about, I just got confused.
sanap
Aug 4, 2010
Undergraduate / How my background has had an impact on my educational goals [10]
I think you should first write down everything you feel fits this essays and it might even go up to 400 words. Then, start cutting out details you feel are not so important and trim your essay down to 250 waords. That is a better approach than aiming for 250 words right away.
I think you should first write down everything you feel fits this essays and it might even go up to 400 words. Then, start cutting out details you feel are not so important and trim your essay down to 250 waords. That is a better approach than aiming for 250 words right away.
sanap
Jul 28, 2010
Writing Feedback / Qualities of good co-workers - first of all, it is most important how they treat their work. [8]
I thought the organisation of your essay was not very clear. I think you should change the voice too.
I think its better to start with an introduction on how you define a good co-worker (and not what an office is). And then, in the body, explain each quality with a supporting example and conclude your essay.
I thought the organisation of your essay was not very clear. I think you should change the voice too.
I think its better to start with an introduction on how you define a good co-worker (and not what an office is). And then, in the body, explain each quality with a supporting example and conclude your essay.
sanap
Jul 28, 2010
Graduate / Why MBA and why from Wharton (a leader in global business): Software Engineer [5]
Thank you --
Thank you --
sanap
Jul 19, 2010
Graduate / Why MBA and why from Wharton (a leader in global business): Software Engineer [5]
Hello:
I am writing essays for Wharton and the essay is about what my goals are and how an MBA can help. This is the question:
As a leader in global business, Wharton is committed to sustaining "a truly global presence through its engagement in the world". What goals are you committed to and why? How do you envision the Wharton MBA contributing to the attainment of those goals?
My profile is I am a Software Engineer with a Masters in Information Technology and 3 years professional experience. Post MBA, I am planning to start up a consultancy on my own or work in a Managerial role in Technology Consulting -- so my main focus in on Strategy Management.
I am having trouble with the organisation of this essay. Do I start with outlining my goals and then explain how I fit in. Can anyone give any pointers.
Thank You.
Pavan
Hello:
I am writing essays for Wharton and the essay is about what my goals are and how an MBA can help. This is the question:
As a leader in global business, Wharton is committed to sustaining "a truly global presence through its engagement in the world". What goals are you committed to and why? How do you envision the Wharton MBA contributing to the attainment of those goals?
My profile is I am a Software Engineer with a Masters in Information Technology and 3 years professional experience. Post MBA, I am planning to start up a consultancy on my own or work in a Managerial role in Technology Consulting -- so my main focus in on Strategy Management.
I am having trouble with the organisation of this essay. Do I start with outlining my goals and then explain how I fit in. Can anyone give any pointers.
Thank You.
Pavan
