Undergraduate / "Argentinian parents" - FSU admission essay "VIRES, ARTES, MORES" [4]

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Experinces I've gone through and learned through others have sculpted the person I am today. Vires embodies the morals I will never break, the endurance I have physically, and the intellect I hold. And as you read this I hope you acknowlege me as the genuine person I am.

An important factor in my life is my family which is the backbone to my every decision.
My parents migrated from Argentina leaving everything behind in order to give me the oppurtunities I have today. After years of tireless toil they had enough to buy their own home.

At the time, my family and I lived in Miami ...