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Aug 25, 2013
Writing Feedback / [IELTS]Task 2: Generally believed that some people are born with certain talents [4]
HI sharman
pls note that an essay body will have at least two paragraphs which will prove what you stated at opening...
See that your sentences about Mike Schumacher are just a example for previous sentence.
what about "Generally when people find certain amount of elegance in the way people play and win or sing and attract audience they tag those people saying they were born with talent."
when u put in new line, it means that you are beginning new paragraph, but only sentence can not make a paragraph.
HI sharman
pls note that an essay body will have at least two paragraphs which will prove what you stated at opening...
See that your sentences about Mike Schumacher are just a example for previous sentence.
what about "Generally when people find certain amount of elegance in the way people play and win or sing and attract audience they tag those people saying they were born with talent."
when u put in new line, it means that you are beginning new paragraph, but only sentence can not make a paragraph.