Undergraduate / "Love working with computers" - Spelman College application essay. Help? [3]

There are a lot of grammar errors, run-on sentences and you repeat yourself sometimes. Get it revised by a teacher; preferably an English teacher. Even better, go to your local college and ask someone in the English department to revise it for you. They're extremely helpful and your essay will not only get better, they'll help organize and cut it down for you.