Writing Feedback / GRE- In any profession, those in power should step down after five years. [4]

broad:

Overall great essay. I suggest that you go over it one more time and try to concentrate on subject-verb agreement.

Here is my attempt at the first paragraph:

I agree insofar asI agree with the speaker's basic assertion that an enterprise needs new leadership through the path to success. However, I don't agree with the speaker's conclusion that in any profession those in power should step down after five years. One of an example to support my opinionTo illustrate, is the common fact that many companies don't change the leader every five year. (Can you an example of a company that didn't implement the five years rule and could still reinvent itself?)

bodosar

Dissertations / PhD topic in Soft Computing Application in ECG [5]

Salam Mohammad,

I am not sure If I will be able to help you find a novel idea. This is the essence of PhD and the most difficult: searching for a novel idea. I went through this 8 months ago, what I did was to talk to as many experts in the field as possible. I discovered that a novel idea does not have to be something major or completely new, it can be an improvement to an existing procedure or theory, an expansion of functionality in the current soft applications, etc.

Goodluck

Abdullah