jay4TOEFL
Sep 9, 2010
Writing Feedback / I disagree that television has destroyed communication between friends and family. [10]
I don't think that television has destroyed communication between friends and family. Television may waste our time. For example, spending time in watching movies, drama and other program of entertainment, despite the fact that it gives us knowledge when we watch channel like discovery, national geographic, history, animal planet etc. TV provides good thing as well as bad things; choice is yours about what you want to watch. It is wrong to say that Television has destroyed communication between friends and family, because watching of television may give some knowledgeable point to discuss and it helps to make interesting communication rather than speaking about crap things.
One reason for television has not destroyed communication between friends and family is that television has so many good programs which make us aware about what is going on in the world. I think that up till now television is cheapest source for getting information, entertainment, news etc. But we have to be sure that it will not hang us on time pass programs and serials. We should not ourselves to become addicted with television and if we can't control on addiction then there are also many potential threats like computer video games, internet etc. which may destroy communication between family and friends. We should not miss our time which we should spend with friends and family. We should give more preference to our friend and family than television.
Furthermore, television is a good source of taking information so we should do proper use of it. For example, People who like to cook can learn about new dish from T.V., We can learn yoga form TV and there are so many things which we can learn from TV to improve our day to day life.
In conclusion, one should aware about which program in TV is good for him or her which will not waste his or her time, save time which should spend with friends and family.
@EF_Kevin : still househusband prefer to watch discovery and housewives prefer to watch serials and cook programs :)
plz.. check this corrected essay...
I don't think that television has destroyed communication between friends and family. Television may waste our time. For example, spending time in watching movies, drama and other program of entertainment, despite the fact that it gives us knowledge when we watch channel like discovery, national geographic, history, animal planet etc. TV provides good thing as well as bad things; choice is yours about what you want to watch. It is wrong to say that Television has destroyed communication between friends and family, because watching of television may give some knowledgeable point to discuss and it helps to make interesting communication rather than speaking about crap things.
One reason for television has not destroyed communication between friends and family is that television has so many good programs which make us aware about what is going on in the world. I think that up till now television is cheapest source for getting information, entertainment, news etc. But we have to be sure that it will not hang us on time pass programs and serials. We should not ourselves to become addicted with television and if we can't control on addiction then there are also many potential threats like computer video games, internet etc. which may destroy communication between family and friends. We should not miss our time which we should spend with friends and family. We should give more preference to our friend and family than television.
Furthermore, television is a good source of taking information so we should do proper use of it. For example, People who like to cook can learn about new dish from T.V., We can learn yoga form TV and there are so many things which we can learn from TV to improve our day to day life.
In conclusion, one should aware about which program in TV is good for him or her which will not waste his or her time, save time which should spend with friends and family.
@EF_Kevin : still househusband prefer to watch discovery and housewives prefer to watch serials and cook programs :)
plz.. check this corrected essay...
