jaduran
Sep 19, 2010
Scholarship / School - healthy lifestyle is a big plus for me [3]
these are my two starting paragraphs. Which one is better??
Why is a healthy lifestyle important in school?
In school I see different types of food and cultures. Many students bring their own food while others just don't mind getting cafeteria food. Some students just eat something different every class period, whatever the case may be, I always find that one student making the better decision in their eating habits.
Staying young is everyone's dream, but getting there is where one's dedication comes to play. In order to live longer and healthier we might begin as early as possible. My mother always taught me to eat my fruits and veggies. Telling me that these foods will get me somewhere in life, and every since then healthy lifestyle is a big plus for me.
these are my two starting paragraphs. Which one is better??
Why is a healthy lifestyle important in school?
In school I see different types of food and cultures. Many students bring their own food while others just don't mind getting cafeteria food. Some students just eat something different every class period, whatever the case may be, I always find that one student making the better decision in their eating habits.
Staying young is everyone's dream, but getting there is where one's dedication comes to play. In order to live longer and healthier we might begin as early as possible. My mother always taught me to eat my fruits and veggies. Telling me that these foods will get me somewhere in life, and every since then healthy lifestyle is a big plus for me.