yeshimdid
Sep 20, 2010
Undergraduate / "future engineers," College Essay - CAD test [3]
This is my first draft of my college admission essay. The prompt was just writing about myself, I tried to make it interesting. I don't feel like my essay really exposes "me" though. I'd like some help on that, and also anything else that needs fixing.
BooleanDifference. Select object one. Select object two. Enter.
Wrong.
BooleanDifference. Select object two. Select object one. Enter.
Wrong again.
Fingers tapping. Mice clicking. I knew class had begun. The day was finally here. For weeks I dreamt about the endless possibility of drawings that could be handed to me. Accomplishing to draw said drawing subliminally would mean a chance at taking the CAD certification test. This test was the success I aimed for. I needed to create indentions in my toy bird's mouth, his beak needed to flaunt its fullness, and give shape to his silhouette. I gander at the clock for what seems like minutes, but seconds have passed.
Delete object two. Delete. Delete. Delete.
"C" enter. Drag mouse back. Enter.
Select object. Move.
BooleanDifference. Select object one. Select object two. Enter.
SUCCESS!
I couldn't help but smile as I admired my bird. He was my creation, my pièce de résistance. My wager for this test. He stood strong on his perch, wings back and beak held high. He reminded me much of myself. I glanced at the clock just in time for the buzzer to sound. The teacher stands and claps. "Congratulations, future engineers, place your drawings in the box." My heart pounds as I reach to place my drawing down. My wrist is grabbed, "Perfect!" spouted the teacher.
This is my first draft of my college admission essay. The prompt was just writing about myself, I tried to make it interesting. I don't feel like my essay really exposes "me" though. I'd like some help on that, and also anything else that needs fixing.
BooleanDifference. Select object one. Select object two. Enter.
Wrong.
BooleanDifference. Select object two. Select object one. Enter.
Wrong again.
Fingers tapping. Mice clicking. I knew class had begun. The day was finally here. For weeks I dreamt about the endless possibility of drawings that could be handed to me. Accomplishing to draw said drawing subliminally would mean a chance at taking the CAD certification test. This test was the success I aimed for. I needed to create indentions in my toy bird's mouth, his beak needed to flaunt its fullness, and give shape to his silhouette. I gander at the clock for what seems like minutes, but seconds have passed.
Delete object two. Delete. Delete. Delete.
"C" enter. Drag mouse back. Enter.
Select object. Move.
BooleanDifference. Select object one. Select object two. Enter.
SUCCESS!
I couldn't help but smile as I admired my bird. He was my creation, my pièce de résistance. My wager for this test. He stood strong on his perch, wings back and beak held high. He reminded me much of myself. I glanced at the clock just in time for the buzzer to sound. The teacher stands and claps. "Congratulations, future engineers, place your drawings in the box." My heart pounds as I reach to place my drawing down. My wrist is grabbed, "Perfect!" spouted the teacher.