UncleMacc
Sep 21, 2010
Undergraduate / "Visiting a friend whom I had never met before" -The biggest risk I have taken/learnt [3]
Honestly, I think is a pretty interesting story, I might be wrong, but I think you should explain the situation a bit more. I also think the first sentence, There is one risk that is prominent in my mind above the rest. , might not be necessary.
Hope I helped a little.
Honestly, I think is a pretty interesting story, I might be wrong, but I think you should explain the situation a bit more. I also think the first sentence, There is one risk that is prominent in my mind above the rest. , might not be necessary.
Hope I helped a little.